We are leaning to write an opinion about a topic .
We read books about the things a pigeon could get up to. to do opinions about.
Phewf! I really think that pigeon needs a bath!
The pigeon needs a bath because people will move away from everywhere he goes because the pigeon will stink!
The pigeon skin will rot if he does not keep himself clean so he has to stay home.
The pigeon's feathers will be so dirty that he will not be able to fly again and that would mean he couldn't get to the library to change his book.
The pigeon will need a bath because he will die with a bad smell on his body.
Wow! awesome writing there about the pigeon needs a bath.
ReplyDeleteI like the sentence called: Phewf! I really think that pigeon needs a bath! because I like the punctuation like the exclamation marks but you will need speech marks for it because that means no one is speaking and they won't know that.
Kadyn
South Hornby Shool