The yuck descending wet brown owey stuff on my hands was horrible stuff, but it was fun and disgusting. I didn't like the stuff because it was to yucky and to mucky. It felt funny touching at the start but after a few minutes it felt great. I felt joy in me, it was so good playing with it.
Connor you chose some interesting words to use in your story. I really like the word descending. Something to think about is to read your work carefully to make sure it makes sense. Great job.
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ReplyDeleteGood to see you bonding with your friends and playing together in the mud.You have used great words in your writing like horrible and descending. Maybe next time you can put a video of you guys playing with the mud. How long did you play with the mud. Was the mud a little dry. I hope to see more fun activitys on you blog. :)
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